Good first attempt Liam. Wing very slightly further back and a wee bit heavier. Thorax a wee bit heavier as well then brush it out and trim tight on the bottom to ensure level. I tie the wing flat over the eye and use the thorax to hold it up so it want's to lean forward. Sounds more complicated than it is and you're almost there going by that pic.
Now enough of this dry fly chite, i'm away back to tyin lures